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@sspencerwire sspencerwire commented Nov 6, 2023

  • remove some passive voice that still existed
  • reword to use "you" instead of "we"
  • some additional sentence simplification
  • use tagging for things that needed to be entered at the keyboard

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* remove some passive voice that still existed
* reword to use "you" instead of "we"
* some additional sentence simplification
* use <kbd></kbd> tagging for things that needed to be entered at the keyboard
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Test results for 1d7ec8a:

Number of broken URLs: 1

URL,RESULT,FILENAME
 https://mirror2.sandyriver.net/pub/rocky/8.8/PowerTools/x86_64/os/,failed,books/admin_guide/13-softwares.md

@sspencerwire sspencerwire merged commit 5e9ea80 into rocky-linux:main Nov 6, 2023
@sspencerwire sspencerwire deleted the minor_fixes_cronjobs_doc branch November 15, 2023 15:02
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