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@sspencerwire sspencerwire commented Aug 10, 2023

  • Fix wording issues reported by @anna_zhy
  • Sentence style capitalization on headings
  • passive voice removal as much as possible
  • most occurrences of "we" are changed to "you"
  • replace conjunctions with words Many more changes need to be made, as 8.5 should not have a separate listing any longer. No one should still be on 8.5.

Author checklist (Completed by original Author)

  • Good fit for the Rocky Linux project? Title and Author Metatags inserted ?
  • If applicable, steps and instructions have been tested to work
  • Initial self-review to fix basic typos and grammar completed

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  • 3rd Pass (Detailed Editorial Review and Peer Review)
  • Final approval (Final Review)

* Fix wording issues reported by @anna_zhy
* Sentence style capitalization on headings
* passive voice removal as much as possible
* most occurrences of "we" are changed to "you"
* replace conjunctions with words
Many more changes need to be made, as 8.5 should not have a separate listing any longer. No one should still be on 8.5.
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Test results for 2d3ce87:

Number of broken URLs: 4

URL,RESULT,FILENAME
 https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ansible/ansible/devel/examples/ansible.cfg,failed,books/learning_ansible/01-basic.md
 https://github.com/ansible/ansible/blob/devel/examples/hosts,failed,books/learning_ansible/01-basic.md
 https://github.com/ansible/ansible/blob/devel/examples/ansible.cfg,failed,books/learning_ansible/01-basic.md
 https://raw.githubusercontent.com/ansible/ansible/devel/examples/hosts,failed,books/learning_ansible/01-basic.md

@sspencerwire sspencerwire merged commit 409067a into rocky-linux:main Aug 10, 2023
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