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Follow-up to #14649

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@mburke5678 mburke5678 changed the title Vmware nsxt VMware NSX-T SDN Install and Config updates May 5, 2019
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mburke5678 commented May 5, 2019

@aheslin FYI I created a PR for the Vmware nsxt issue.
#14649
I thought it quicker to add my edits here. This is a first pass. LMK if we are going forward with this.

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@mburke5678 in case you don't get a response from Ali, yes, we are going ahead with it.

Does this supercede #14649?

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@vikram-redhat Do we want to refer people out to the OpenShift install docs here and remove the command?

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@vikram-redhat Do we want to refer people out to the OpenShift install prerequisite docs here and remove the command?

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@RobbieJVMW Can you review my changes? I want to make sure my efforts to change the wording and such to better fit the OpenShift docs doesn't change any technical meaning.
Also, I have a few questions in #14649

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@ousleyp Can you review this partner doc? They want it live by tomorrow for Summit.

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, which

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s/OpenShift Container Platform/{product-title}

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s/datacenter/data center

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"NSX-T Data Center" is the product name. :)

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s/Cetner/Center

Not sure Data Center is a proper noun here. If not, I think we can lower case it.

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Agree in this context it should probably say "NSX-T Manager" rather than "NSX-T Data Center"

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I believe that is the name of the product.
https://www.vmware.com/products/nsx.html

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The NSX-T Container Plug-In (NCP) integrates {product-title} into an NSX-T Manager, which is typically configured for the entire datacenter.

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s/refer to the/refer to

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s/LoadBalancer/load balancer

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@ahardin-rh Is this a kubernetes object, here? They use LoadBalancer.

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topology, the

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point to the infrastructure node IP addresses?

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s/LoadBalancer/load balancer

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s/3/three
s/4/four

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s/LoadBalancer/load balancer

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s/&/and

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s/Plugin/Plug-in

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s/plugin/plug-in
s/in NCP Tar file/in the NCP tar file
s/vmWare/VMware

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Did they change vmWare? Could sworn it was that way, but you are right....

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s/setup/set up

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s/OpenShift Container Platform/{product-title}

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@ahardin-rh Do we want to change that one to {product-title}? It is the name of the section in the link.

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For example, check

@ahardin-rh ahardin-rh added the peer-review-done Signifies that the peer review team has reviewed this PR label May 7, 2019
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@mburke5678 Just some minor comments from me. Otherwise, looks good!

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@ahardin-rh Thanks for the great (and quick) review!

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mburke5678 commented May 7, 2019

Per Robbie in email:
One of my NSX specialists have already taken a look at the preview site and didn’t flag anything. He knows NSX far better than I so I would consider that a green light.

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/cherrypick enterprise-3.11

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