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@mburke5678 in case you don't get a response from Ali, yes, we are going ahead with it. Does this supercede #14649? |
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@vikram-redhat Do we want to refer people out to the OpenShift install docs here and remove the command?
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@vikram-redhat Do we want to refer people out to the OpenShift install prerequisite docs here and remove the command?
@RobbieJVMW Can you review my changes? I want to make sure my efforts to change the wording and such to better fit the OpenShift docs doesn't change any technical meaning. |
@ousleyp Can you review this partner doc? They want it live by tomorrow for Summit. |
architecture/topics/nsxt.adoc
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, which
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s/OpenShift Container Platform/{product-title}
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s/datacenter/data center
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"NSX-T Data Center" is the product name. :)
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s/Cetner/Center
Not sure Data Center is a proper noun here. If not, I think we can lower case it.
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Agree in this context it should probably say "NSX-T Manager" rather than "NSX-T Data Center"
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I believe that is the name of the product.
https://www.vmware.com/products/nsx.html
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The NSX-T Container Plug-In (NCP) integrates {product-title} into an NSX-T Manager, which is typically configured for the entire datacenter.
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s/refer to the/refer to
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s/LoadBalancer/load balancer
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@ahardin-rh Is this a kubernetes object, here? They use LoadBalancer.
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topology, the
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point to the infrastructure node IP addresses?
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s/LoadBalancer/load balancer
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s/3/three
s/4/four
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s/LoadBalancer/load balancer
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s/&/and
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s/Plugin/Plug-in
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s/plugin/plug-in
s/in NCP Tar file/in the NCP tar file
s/vmWare/VMware
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Did they change vmWare? Could sworn it was that way, but you are right....
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s/setup/set up
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s/OpenShift Container Platform/{product-title}
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@ahardin-rh Do we want to change that one to {product-title}? It is the name of the section in the link.
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For example, check
@mburke5678 Just some minor comments from me. Otherwise, looks good! |
@ahardin-rh Thanks for the great (and quick) review! |
Per Robbie in email: |
/cherrypick enterprise-3.11 |
@mburke5678: once the present PR merges, I will cherry-pick it on top of enterprise-3.11 in a new PR and assign it to you. In response to this:
Instructions for interacting with me using PR comments are available here. If you have questions or suggestions related to my behavior, please file an issue against the kubernetes/test-infra repository. |
@mburke5678: new pull request created: #14754 In response to this:
Instructions for interacting with me using PR comments are available here. If you have questions or suggestions related to my behavior, please file an issue against the kubernetes/test-infra repository. |
Follow-up to #14649