editing again lab4-advanced-system-process-monitoring.md

[sspencerwire]

• translator found a few issues while translating
• fixes for some missing code blocks
• fixes for some contractions
• fixes for some variable use inconsistencies

Author checklist (Completed by original Author)

• Good fit for the Rocky Linux project? Title and Author Metatags inserted ?
• If applicable, steps and instructions have been tested to work
• Initial self-review to fix basic typos and grammar completed

Rocky Documentation checklist (Completed by Rocky team)

• 1st Pass (Document is good fit for project and author checklist completed)
• 2nd Pass (Technical Review - check for technical correctness)
• 3rd Pass (Detailed Editorial Review and Peer Review)
• Final approval (Final Review)

[github-actions]

Test results for d08c987:

Number of broken URLs: 5

URL,RESULT,FILENAME
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 http://$(hostname):8080,failed,guides/repositories/pulp_fetch_upload.md
 https://allcontributors.org/docs/en/emoji-key,failed,guides/contribute/README.md
 http://howtotechwriting.com/,failed,guides/contribute/README.md
 http://your_ip,failed,guides/cms/mediawiki.md