From 1eab8d134802efbc3cc9191dcd4b5d28057b5109 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Antoine Le Morvan Date: Wed, 31 May 2023 08:55:56 +0200 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Update 07-file-systems.md --- docs/books/admin_guide/07-file-systems.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/books/admin_guide/07-file-systems.md b/docs/books/admin_guide/07-file-systems.md index 22adf70973..2324972bec 100644 --- a/docs/books/admin_guide/07-file-systems.md +++ b/docs/books/admin_guide/07-file-systems.md @@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ sudo fdisk -l /dev/sdc2 ### `parted` command -The `parted` (_partition editor_) command is able to partition a disk, it solves the shortcomings of `fdisk`. We recommend that you use the `parted` command instead. +The `parted` (_partition editor_) command is able to partition a disk, it solves the shortcomings of `fdisk`, so we recommend that you use the `parted` command instead of `fdisk`. The `parted` command can be used either on the command-line or interactively. It also has a recovery function capable of rewriting a deleted partition table. @@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ Example: ### Preparation of the physical media -The preparation with LVM of the physical support is broken down as follows: +The preparation with LVM of the physical support is broken down into as follows: * Setting up the physical disk * Partitioning of the volumes From 9f39fa6f9f95ea0b4a1937f9f0c39c1e0fef3492 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: sspencerwire Date: Wed, 31 May 2023 07:37:27 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Update 07-file-systems.md I believe this will read better. --- docs/books/admin_guide/07-file-systems.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/docs/books/admin_guide/07-file-systems.md b/docs/books/admin_guide/07-file-systems.md index 2324972bec..07a56ed62d 100644 --- a/docs/books/admin_guide/07-file-systems.md +++ b/docs/books/admin_guide/07-file-systems.md @@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ Example: ### Preparation of the physical media -The preparation with LVM of the physical support is broken down into as follows: +The preparation with LVM of the physical support is broken down into the following: * Setting up the physical disk * Partitioning of the volumes