# Minor corrections to 9.3 release notes

Author: sspencerwire

docs/release_notes/9_3.md

@@ -22,9 +22,9 @@ You can upgrade from Rocky Linux 9.x to Rocky Linux 9.3 by doing `sudo dnf -y up
 
 Several images are available along with the normal install images, including cloud and container platforms.
 
-* The 9.3 release brings back cloud and container images for ppc64le that were not released with 9.2 due to issues with QEMU. These images may be divergant from the other architecture's images in some small ways, but we will work to reduce this delta in future releases of the images. 
+* The 9.3 release brings back cloud and container images for ppc64le that were not released with 9.2 due to issues with QEMU. These images may be divergent from the other architecture's images in some small ways, but we will work to reduce this delta in future releases of the images. 
 
-You can find more on the artifacts produced by the Cloud Special Interest Group, and information for how to get involved on the [SIG/Cloud Wiki page](https://sig-cloud.rocky.page/).
+You can find more on the artifacts produced by the Cloud Special Interest Group, and information on how to get involved on the [SIG/Cloud Wiki page](https://sig-cloud.rocky.page/).
 
 ## Installing
 
@@ -34,13 +34,13 @@ To install Rocky Linux 9.3, head to the [download page](https://rockylinux.org/d
 
 ### Breaking changes
 
-* The optional `guest-agents` group, previously available within both the *Minimal Install* and *Custom Operating System* base environments in anaconda, is no-longer available for selection as additional software for those environments. If you require the guest-agents group, it is available in either the *Server* or *Server with GUI* base environments. If you install *Minimal Install* or *Custom Operating System* and still want guest-agents, you can do so by installing the package target directly in Kickstart, or by installing it with DNF after installation has completed (i.e., `dnf install @guest-agents`).
+* The optional `guest-agents` group, previously available within both the *Minimal Install* and *Custom Operating System* base environments in anaconda, is no longer available for selection as additional software for those environments. If you require the guest-agents group, it is available in either the *Server* or *Server with GUI* base environments. If you install *Minimal Install* or *Custom Operating System* and still want guest-agents, you can do so by installing the package target directly in Kickstart, or by installing it with DNF after installation has completed (i.e., `dnf install @guest-agents`).
 
 #### Live Images
 
-* Installing live images for XFCE, MATE, Workstation, and Workstation-Lite, will display an error regarding `NetworkManager-dispatcher.service`. This continues after installation and the service does not load or run. The installation seems to work in all other capacities however. To remove the SELinux messages regarding this service, do a `touch /.autorelabel` followed by a system reboot to silence the SELinux messages. The Cinnamon live image does not display this behaviour. 
+* Installing live images for XFCE, MATE, Workstation, and Workstation-Lite, will display an error regarding `NetworkManager-dispatcher.service`. This continues after installation and the service does not load or run. The installation seems to work in all other capacities however. To remove the SELinux messages regarding this service, do a `touch /.autorelabel` followed by a system reboot to silence the SELinux messages. The Cinnamon live image does not display this behavior. 
 
-* The KDE live image for Rocky Linux 9.3 had problems during the testing phase. For this, we will be providing the older 9.2 images until we can build and provide a working image.
+* The KDE live image for Rocky Linux 9.3 had problems during the testing phase. We will be providing the older 9.2 images until we can build and provide a working image.
 
 ### New and notable
 
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ Listed below are security-related highlights in the latest Rocky Linux 9.3 relea
 * OpenSCAP rebased to version 1.3.8.
 * SCAP Security Guide rebased to version 0.1.69. 
 
-### Dynamic programming languages, web and database servers
+### Dynamic programming languages, web, and database servers
 
 For a detailed list of the changes in this category see the [upstream link here](https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-us/red_hat_enterprise_linux/9/html/9.3_release_notes/new-features#new-features-dynamic-programming-languages-web-and-database-servers).
 
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ Many known issues exist in 9.3 including those related to:
 * Networking
 * Kernel
 * Filesystem and storage
-* Dynamic programming lanaguages, web and database servers
+* Dynamic programming languages, web, and database servers
 * Compilers and development tools
 * Identity management
 * Desktop